EL3 Writing Bottle Sprayer

For one of our Writing workshops for early level 3 We found out how the bottle sprayer nozzle works and then Everybody had to write in their own words how it works.This is my writing.We also use a word bank and everytime I use the one of the words I cross it out. The second time I looked at the sprayer I looked closer at the details to understand it better.

The water gets sucked up with the air from the bottle. When the tiny tank at the top of the tube is full the plunger puts pressure on  the water in the tank so it releases and shoots. it comes out the hollow tube then the trigger forces it to spray out of the nozzle because it has nowhere else  to go.

By Lani

I used a lot of detail in my piece of writing it was better than my usual writing because I took time to look for detail.

Storybird Poem

Today we tried Storybird and wrote some poems about about a friendly monster hiding in our bedroom. This is my poem.

Mothers Day card

This is outside and inside of my Mother's Day card. It was really effective my mum loved it.
The first line was alliteration, line 2 was 3 adjectives, line 3 was a nickname, line 4 was a simile, line 5 was a three word statement about my mum.